Current state of affairs: Artist statement and Artwork

Not happy with this in its current state. 100% not convinced of the wording. Thoughts welcomed.

This body of works presents forms and images that chase the freedom of the spaceships and airplanes of my memory. These objects presented me with imaginary freedom. Freedom to move without restriction, but also a freedom to explore and be something more. The freedom to pursue the frontier of my imagination. Physically, these objects explore the awe and wonder of machina. Juxtaposing the simplicity and sleekness of design but the complexities of manufacture.